(Hero idea) Lyle "Menace" Bludgeons-Technological Rocker

[MyWifeLeftMe]

Lyle is dressed in a jean jacket covered in rocker patches with ripped jeans and a huge green Mohawk and leg high boots with 3 inch soles

Weapon-noise complaint-Lyle runs around with his tricked out guitar a bunch of tech and accessories that improve its sound with a built in amp in the base of the guitar it fires out music notes in rapid succession
max ammo-15

Ability 1-rocker slide-Lyle slides forward on his knees strumming his guitar as it creates a damaging aoe around him
Cooldown-27 seconds
Length-15m
AOE-5m

1-+25 spirit
2-increased AOE range +3m and length of slide +5m
5-sliding into enemies knocks them up


2-guitar slam-Lyle slams his guitar down infront of him sending out an electric shockwave that slows and deals spirit damage to enemies
Cooldown-24s
Range-7m

1-increase range +3m
2-increased spirit damage to enemies within 3m
5-+45 spirit and slow duration +.5s

3-power chord-Lyle charges up one big strum on his guitar that sends a music note towards enemies and passes through them dealing spirit damage if channel is fully done the max damage is done to enemies
Cooldown-22s
Range-15m
Channel-3s

1-projectile speed increased
2-faster channel speed
5-damage is increase the longer it travels

Ult-solo time-Lyle starts doing a guitar solo where every strum of his guitar does a different affect chosen by the player
Send out 6 notes
Cooldown-150s
range-20m
Duration-7s or until all 6 shots are done

1-true spirit damage
2-movement slow
3-resistance debuff
4-fire rate decrease
All choices do spirit damage

1-gain +3ms while in ult
2-+2 shots
5-attacks chain to nearby enemies within 8m

 

[Aush0J]

Welcome to Deadlock, Largo.

Amazing visual design on the hero. The weapon is wicked. I can already think Lyle and Billy being friends because of the punk style outfit. Hope it gets added.

 

[MyWifeLeftMe]

Welcome to Deadlock, Largo.

Amazing visual design on the hero. The weapon is wicked. I can already think Lyle and Billy being friends because of the punk style outfit. Hope it gets added.

thanks i had the same idea with billy and how they could have some fun conversations or billy being a fan

 

[MyWifeLeftMe]

3D generated lyle

 

[Hipster Monkey]

Ha! This is really cool! It's kinda similar to my thread from Feburary for Buddy, the Six-String Samurai. Here.

You're gun really reminds me of mine, and there are other similatires. NOT SAYING, you took any, but please, please, please, feel free to look at mine and take any ideas you feel you could add to yours! Lmao, I wish I saw this earlier, I just posted v3 of Buddy.

WHAT IF, we turn that Ult into a regular ability akin to Wraith's cards? Lyle could be a debuff machine?

Up the Punx

 

[MyWifeLeftMe]

Ha! This is really cool! It's kinda similar to my thread from Feburary for Buddy, the Six-String Samurai. Here.

You're gun really reminds me of mine, and there are other similatires. NOT SAYING, you took any, but please, please, please, feel free to look at mine and take any ideas you feel you could add to yours! Lmao, I wish I saw this earlier, I just posted v3 of Buddy.

WHAT IF, we turn that Ult into a regular ability akin to Wraith's cards? Lyle could be a debuff machine?

Up the Punx

not gonna lie its crazy how two minds can think alike and with the recent update to deadlock and wraiths kit i can agree with you on the ult cause i wasnt always 100% on rocker slide as a ability so i feel like that would be a good switch with some tweaks i can make both fit what would be needed

 

[MyWifeLeftMe]

Ha! This is really cool! It's kinda similar to my thread from Feburary for Buddy, the Six-String Samurai. Here.

You're gun really reminds me of mine, and there are other similatires. NOT SAYING, you took any, but please, please, please, feel free to look at mine and take any ideas you feel you could add to yours! Lmao, I wish I saw this earlier, I just posted v3 of Buddy.

WHAT IF, we turn that Ult into a regular ability akin to Wraith's cards? Lyle could be a debuff machine?

Up the Punx

your idea is awesome and honestly better then mine because you went so in depth with how your abilities act and correspond to the rest of the kit

 

[XaNo11]

ew, AI art.

Aside from that, Billy is already a punk character aesthetic and your concept is awfuly unoriginal as the characters has no original abilities or gimmicks.

TL;DR feedback:

- Work on the structure of your text. Reading it felt like I was a teacher grading a middle school student. It isn't necessary at all but the fact you're using AI art is an insult.
- Stop wasting water on those AWFUL AI generated images. If you're gonna post ideas, stop ripping off real artists and posting slop on the forums.
- Your designs feel greatly one-dimensional. Instead of involving numbers just focus on the abilities themselves and how fun the character would be.