danielcraneson
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Mark is out for vengeance. New York is finally rebuilding after the war (take this detail with a grain of salt, I'm just theorizing some lore. Doesn't have to be related to WWII. Could've been a deadlock civil war some sort etc..), and Mark feels he needs to justify anyone who is getting in the way or worsening the situation. Mark has connections with the Tunnel Rats and their underground tunnels. This is how he sneaks up and captured his victims. He has no office, or home. He is tirelessly working to take care of the city and the people he cares about safe.
(additional/optional lore)
Before Mark became who he was today, he generated plans and gathered clues to find his victims. Fortunately, one day His eye was damaged from a rejuvenator shank one of his enemies engineered. He was wanted to theft of souls but didn't want to kill him. His eye then encountered a strange regeneration. He noticed (Mark) has developed a 6th sense in the eye that helps find his victims miraculously. Almost like a track, if he thinks hard enough or engages his sense enough in whatever way he needs- he will find them.
Abilities:
1st: Cuffed (Ability)
The enemy becomes weaponless and cannot shoot or mele for (x) amount of time. Enemy is not silenced and can still parry
2nd: Mark Two (Ability)
Mark gains the ability to wield two guns at once, doubling his ammunition. This will last for only (x) seconds.
3rd: Pitter Patter (Passive)
Mark is able to move around quietly and once fully leveled can go invisible.. The analogy I was thinking w (but may be op) if the following levels:
1st Level: 50% Less foot detection
2nd Level: +Ability to run along walls for 5 seconds (30 to 45 sec cd?) {tentative Level up thought}
3rd Level: +Ability to allow allies withing a 20 meter distance to get same?
(Again, just theorizing. But he should definitely get a passive on some sort)
4th: Stalker Trance (Passive)
Mark has a sense that's activated every last round bullet he fires that will last for approximately (x) seconds. Reloading before round is Completely empty will randomize the track (rng) on the next round. Until the next round is completely empty before reloading, it will restart once it's triggered. When these bullets hit the enemy, he is able to track them for up to 1 to 3 minutes (pending on level up). As he tracks them, he is able to see them on the map and character orientation through walls. Max Level (Stalker Trance) will allow his team mates to see the same (enemies through walls, and on map).
(this is an AI image that I changed like 10 different times, so please don't judge me. I am no artist. please forgive me for using AI)
Please give me some feedback or some lore/ability suggestions.
Thank you!
(additional/optional lore)
Before Mark became who he was today, he generated plans and gathered clues to find his victims. Fortunately, one day His eye was damaged from a rejuvenator shank one of his enemies engineered. He was wanted to theft of souls but didn't want to kill him. His eye then encountered a strange regeneration. He noticed (Mark) has developed a 6th sense in the eye that helps find his victims miraculously. Almost like a track, if he thinks hard enough or engages his sense enough in whatever way he needs- he will find them.
Abilities:
1st: Cuffed (Ability)
The enemy becomes weaponless and cannot shoot or mele for (x) amount of time. Enemy is not silenced and can still parry
2nd: Mark Two (Ability)
Mark gains the ability to wield two guns at once, doubling his ammunition. This will last for only (x) seconds.
3rd: Pitter Patter (Passive)
Mark is able to move around quietly and once fully leveled can go invisible.. The analogy I was thinking w (but may be op) if the following levels:
1st Level: 50% Less foot detection
2nd Level: +Ability to run along walls for 5 seconds (30 to 45 sec cd?) {tentative Level up thought}
3rd Level: +Ability to allow allies withing a 20 meter distance to get same?
(Again, just theorizing. But he should definitely get a passive on some sort)
4th: Stalker Trance (Passive)
Mark has a sense that's activated every last round bullet he fires that will last for approximately (x) seconds. Reloading before round is Completely empty will randomize the track (rng) on the next round. Until the next round is completely empty before reloading, it will restart once it's triggered. When these bullets hit the enemy, he is able to track them for up to 1 to 3 minutes (pending on level up). As he tracks them, he is able to see them on the map and character orientation through walls. Max Level (Stalker Trance) will allow his team mates to see the same (enemies through walls, and on map).
(this is an AI image that I changed like 10 different times, so please don't judge me. I am no artist. please forgive me for using AI)
Please give me some feedback or some lore/ability suggestions.
Thank you!
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