AlmightyChaos
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I've had something of a burnout(and a Headache today) while making this, but, despite all that, I've managed to get this done eventually!
I've added my Personal commentaries in Red Text as we go.
And so, with all that, Let's get on with this Hero:
Oscuro, the Leader of the Doomsday Cult 'Disciples of the One'!
Oscuro is capable of causing insurmountable destruction upon his foes, thanks to the powers given to him by his master, the Dark God, Zor'Nath.
Lore:
'Disciples of the One' were a Large Doomsday Cult dedicated to the Worship of the Dark god, Known to them as 'Zor'Nath'.
This vast group of believers were led by the Enigmatic, Powerful figure known only by his name, Oscuro. Already imbued by the dark powers granted to him by his Master, his position as their Prophet and Leader was unquestionable.
He led the Cult for a number of years, sacrificing many of their victims for rituals. Each ritual would be a step closer to bringing their God to this world, and in doing so, to bring about the 'cleansing' upon the Earth, so that a 'New Eden', as they called it, would arise from the Ashes of the Earth. To outsiders, this would mean the End of the World.
But, as they were about to sacrifice the Last of their 30 victims for their foul Deity, their plans were utterly thwarted by the sudden arrival of OSIC agents, as they raided their temple. In the fight that ensued, all of the Disciples were either Apprehended or Killed, However, only Oscuro himself has managed to escape.
Now, Oscuro has spent years being on the run, Not helped by the fact that he had been placed at the Top five Most Wanted List by the OSIC, He has been evading capture, guided by the voice of Zor'Nath himself.
Now, with the arrival of the Patrons imminent, Zor'Nath senses the Opportunity. He instructed Oscuro, his chosen one, to seek out the Patrons, and coerce them into freeing him from his Prison, so that he may finally lay claim to Earth itself, and bring about the Apocalypse...
Personal Commentary: Good lord, I had such a hard time coming up with a proper lore for this one! It was pretty exhausting, mentally. Anyway, I explored the idea of Gods and Deities, other than Patrons, existing in Deadlock, so here we have a Dark God named Zor'Nath, to which this Hero's Cult worships.
Personal Commentary:
Main weapon is essentially a Mauser M712. His sacrificial Dagger, however, is used for his Melee attacks. I initially wanted a 4-round burst weapon, but, couldn't come up with any, so I then chose a Rapid fire weapon instead. I also intended at some point to have the main weapon to be bolts of magic coming from Oscuro's hands.
Personal Commentary: Fragile, Low Stamina, but Fast moving.
Personal Commentary: One of your two main tools. At first, the 3rd Upgrade would apply slow to everyone around the impact, instead of just the first hit target, but I changed it to Immobilizing the first hit target instead. I figure the 0.75s doesn't sound too bad, but I did consider letting it be at 0.5s at some point.
Personal Commentary: Your escape tool, kinda. Had been through some brainstorming with almost everything about this Ability. Kind of had a hard time with this one, though.
Personal Commentary: Another of your important tools, and what I would consider a follow up, after using the 1st ability. Who doesn't love a big Pillar of fire?
Personal Commentary: This ability is, essentially, a BFG-9000 from Doom, but in Deadlock Universe!
Do let me know what you think of this!
I've added my Personal commentaries in Red Text as we go.
And so, with all that, Let's get on with this Hero:
Oscuro, the Leader of the Doomsday Cult 'Disciples of the One'!
Oscuro is capable of causing insurmountable destruction upon his foes, thanks to the powers given to him by his master, the Dark God, Zor'Nath.
Lore:
'Disciples of the One' were a Large Doomsday Cult dedicated to the Worship of the Dark god, Known to them as 'Zor'Nath'.
This vast group of believers were led by the Enigmatic, Powerful figure known only by his name, Oscuro. Already imbued by the dark powers granted to him by his Master, his position as their Prophet and Leader was unquestionable.
He led the Cult for a number of years, sacrificing many of their victims for rituals. Each ritual would be a step closer to bringing their God to this world, and in doing so, to bring about the 'cleansing' upon the Earth, so that a 'New Eden', as they called it, would arise from the Ashes of the Earth. To outsiders, this would mean the End of the World.
But, as they were about to sacrifice the Last of their 30 victims for their foul Deity, their plans were utterly thwarted by the sudden arrival of OSIC agents, as they raided their temple. In the fight that ensued, all of the Disciples were either Apprehended or Killed, However, only Oscuro himself has managed to escape.
Now, Oscuro has spent years being on the run, Not helped by the fact that he had been placed at the Top five Most Wanted List by the OSIC, He has been evading capture, guided by the voice of Zor'Nath himself.
Now, with the arrival of the Patrons imminent, Zor'Nath senses the Opportunity. He instructed Oscuro, his chosen one, to seek out the Patrons, and coerce them into freeing him from his Prison, so that he may finally lay claim to Earth itself, and bring about the Apocalypse...
Personal Commentary: Good lord, I had such a hard time coming up with a proper lore for this one! It was pretty exhausting, mentally. Anyway, I explored the idea of Gods and Deities, other than Patrons, existing in Deadlock, so here we have a Dark God named Zor'Nath, to which this Hero's Cult worships.
| Weapon: Bleak Prophecy |
| Medium Range Rapid Fire Falloff Range: 20m - 51m |
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Personal Commentary:
Main weapon is essentially a Mauser M712. His sacrificial Dagger, however, is used for his Melee attacks. I initially wanted a 4-round burst weapon, but, couldn't come up with any, so I then chose a Rapid fire weapon instead. I also intended at some point to have the main weapon to be bolts of magic coming from Oscuro's hands.
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Personal Commentary: Fragile, Low Stamina, but Fast moving.
| Ability 1: Shadow Flux |
| Fire a Projectile that hits the first enemy in it's path and explodes, dealing Damage and applying Movement slow to all enemies in the radius. |
| Upgrade 1: +0.75m Radius Upgrade 2: +60 Damage and -3 Cooldown Upgrade 3: On hit: Immobilize the First hit Target for 0.75s |
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Personal Commentary: One of your two main tools. At first, the 3rd Upgrade would apply slow to everyone around the impact, instead of just the first hit target, but I changed it to Immobilizing the first hit target instead. I figure the 0.75s doesn't sound too bad, but I did consider letting it be at 0.5s at some point.
| Ability 2: Sanctuary |
| Transcend to Another plane and Become Invincible and Untargetable for a short duration. While in this state, gain Bonus Move Speed and Health Regen. |
| Upgrade 1: +0.5m/s Move Speed Upgrade 2: -10 Cooldown Upgrade 3: Deal 175 Damage to Enemies within 5m Radius when the Ability ends. Scales with Spirit Power. |
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Personal Commentary: Your escape tool, kinda. Had been through some brainstorming with almost everything about this Ability. Kind of had a hard time with this one, though.
| Ability 3: Pillar of Torment |
| Summon a Fiery Pillar of Dark Magic at a target location, dealing Continuous Damage to all Enemies standing inside the Pillar. A Smaller Pillar branches off onto any Enemies leaving the Area, dealing Damage over time for 3s. |
| Upgrade 1: -2 Cooldown Upgrade 2: +1.5m Radius Upgrade 3: +80 Pillar DPS |
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Personal Commentary: Another of your important tools, and what I would consider a follow up, after using the 1st ability. Who doesn't love a big Pillar of fire?
| Ultimate Ability: Judgment Day |
| After 1s, Fire a Large, Destructive Projectile that travels in a straight line and Explodes upon impact, dealing Damage to all enemies in the Radius. While in flight, the Projectile emits Beams that Tether onto any and all nearby enemies, dealing Continuous Damage per second. Beams will not be emitted onto enemies that are out of the Projectile's Line of Sight. |
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Personal Commentary: This ability is, essentially, a BFG-9000 from Doom, but in Deadlock Universe!
Do let me know what you think of this!
