[Hero Concept] Bea - Disruptive, Zone Control, Buzzzzz

[StalwartSpirit]

Hello, guys! This is my first post here and I wanted to share my concept for a hero! Her name is Bea, and her entire kit is revolved around, you guessed it, bees!

Her kit and playstyle are based on harassing the enemies and supporting your allies rather than dealing large damage herself. She is an incredibly sweet woman who doesn't really want to hurt anyone, but duty calls. She loves bee puns.

LORE:
Bea was born into a long family line of druids that came to America during pioneer times. Overtime, the grove they were looking after had evolved into more of a family ranch. Bea, like her family members, was born with the innate ability to communicate with animals. However, she was most adept at tending to the atrium. Unfortunately, the ranch is under threat of being bought and foreclosed by Fairfax Industries. Now, Bea has packed her bags, picked up her gun, and brought her busy friends along to the ritual so she can find a way to save her family legacy.

WEAPON: SUGAR HONEY ICED TEA
A slow firing rifle with really fast bullets.

ABILITIES:

1, Soaring Stinger: Fire a spectral stinger that pierces enemies. The damage is based on how far it has traveled.

2, Golden Guard: Summon a swarm of bees to engulf and protect an ally. The chosen ally gains a barrier that passively damages enemies who get too close. Can be self-cast.

3, Infestation: Place down a hive. Hives will periodically spawn a swarm of bees. The bees will generally follow you and attack nearby enemies. If you aren't there, the bees will patrol a small area near the hive instead.

4, Honey Trap: Throw a flask of honey that explodes. Enemies caught in the initial blast are rooted. Enemies and creeps that walk into the area of honey are severely slowed.

What do you guys think? I would love some feedback!

 

[Tpaul]

I think it would be cooler if she was more support and macro focused like Rem i think the 1 should apply a sting that slows and increases damage taken for a short time so the team can focus someone and kill them i think the 3rd ability is to similar to graves ult so i think it should change to a passive called bee sting where any damage you do builds up and does the same effect as your 1 i think it would be cool if it was like shiv or mirage where the passive can stack the more stings the more damage taken and the slower your get and i would change the 2 ability to go with it im not really a fan of barriers but it would alright but i think it should be like rem minions where you get 5 bees and you can put them on a teamate buffing movement speed and the damage they apply could proc your passive but i think the ult is really good and it should also proc the passive or you could change it to a bee hive that your throw and it slows a lot and every couple seconds the bees on the enemy will sting them stunning them for a short time and proccing the passive i think the ult would kinda be like affiliction so have it last a long time but not as much damage and no reduced healing.

 

[StalwartSpirit]

I think it would be cooler if she was more support and macro focused like Rem i think the 1 should apply a sting that slows and increases damage taken for a short time so the team can focus someone and kill them i think the 3rd ability is to similar to graves ult so i think it should change to a passive called bee sting where any damage you do builds up and does the same effect as your 1 i think it would be cool if it was like shiv or mirage where the passive can stack the more stings the more damage taken and the slower your get and i would change the 2 ability to go with it im not really a fan of barriers but it would alright but i think it should be like rem minions where you get 5 bees and you can put them on a teamate buffing movement speed and the damage they apply could proc your passive but i think the ult is really good and it should also proc the passive or you could change it to a bee hive that your throw and it slows a lot and every couple seconds the bees on the enemy will sting them stunning them for a short time and proccing the passive i think the ult would kinda be like affiliction so have it last a long time but not as much damage and no reduced healing.

Wow! Thanks for the feedback! If I'm being honest, I actually came up with Bea before Graves was released so I was somewhat worried of the similarities. I like the idea of the third ability!