The Baker Witch, Against Destiny [Saving Boho with a Redesing]

Understyle29

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I heard rumors that Boho wouldn't be published because her kit were used on other heroes, so i thought on a new kit, a new story, and even a weapon for saving the idea cause i liked a lot the desing.

Boho Abilities





Boho Can be a Spirit scaler or, for funny a health scaler with some ability scaling with health, or maybe both health and spiritual





  1. Alchemist Shop: Boho will Generate on the map Herbs that she can Collect using the ability, after that a short cooldown is activated where she brew the potion.
    Each herb have their own Ability:
    Green: heal allies
    Red: damage to enemy
    Blue:Shields
    Yellow: Haste.
    Lv.2 More Plants spawn near boho and the area of the splash is larger
    Lv.3 Potion Can be mixed now giving both effects
    Max Lv. Certain Mix gives some extra Buff
    Red+Green: Life steal
    Yellow+Red: more Ammo
    Blue+Green: Bigger Heal and Shield
    Blue+ Yellow: KnockBack explosion and faster movement when shield is broken
  2. Risky Manuver: She can conjure her Broom to fly to safety.
    Lv2 Duration up and it is more faster.
    Lv3 Regeneration and shield while flying
    LvMax Allies Can op on the broom to fly away
  3. No Waste: Boho Throw her Calderon to a Zone where it start to spill the Brew of the potion’s leftover everywhere. The brew stays on the ground for a while Slowing down the enemy and damaging who stand inside
    The Calderound gains stacks Max 7, for each time Boho use a potion, the more potion the more the Calderon last before emptying it out, boho must use at least one potion before it can be casted again.
    Lv.2 Larger radius and more Spilling, The Calderon can keep, the slowing is increase +1 stack
    LV.3 Calderon keep track of the lsat used 2 potion and reuse the effects (if it is too strong it can heal allies who walk on eat)
    Lv.Max Calderoun have always atleast one stack and enemy who stand to long get immobilized
  4. Eat that you are skinny: Boho brew the ultimate potion by using it Allies get bonus health and resistance and get more larger, healing them for 25% of there max health. Alternate casting reduce the size of the allies in range and boost their movement speed and fire ratio but reduce their health.
    Lv.1 The heal goes to by 50% if the Calderon is full
    Lv.2 Enlarged Allies gets melee damage up and regeneration. Reduced Allies, Gets more Ammos and another Sprint
    Lv. Max Allies lose their Boost instead of dying going to 25% of their max health.




The Ultimate can be tweaked to scaling instead of fixed heal, but I think it can be used.


I think she should fight with a wodden spoon or a whisk. Called the “Family Legacy”, that she would whip around like a whip with remnants of the potions as the tail of the whip (in Italian Whip and Whisk have the same name, frusta)

Her Character could be an eccentric provoking girl, a Tomboy aggressive and Funny. If you want the Italian translation of the Ability: 1. Negozio Alchemico 2. Fuga Rocambolesca
3. Non si butta via niente 4. Mangia che sei Magro

if you need a new story or a why to her ability:

Her story could be:
Boho is a Bad Omen, or atleast that what down in her Town in South-Italy call her. Born in an unnamed village, she is the Seven Daughter of a family down in Italy and the last twin who were born, not only that she was born with unsual color of hair, that in the folklore of their city were a lot of bad omens in a single person. Where she lived everyone where really superstitious but her father helped getting along the community even after all the difficulties, and the prejudice. Boho and hers Brothers and Sisters helped their parents with their bakery, Boho can see somethings that the other of their family cannot see. A work beyond a small and light veil where she gathered all sort of strange ingredients.when she understand the power of her conception and food, she left the bakery and not far away opened her herbal shop to help her Town with medical problems to prosper, the first alchemist shop in their village. Her skills where so incredibles that all Italy where exctatic to knowing her, so she travel or the Country to learn and help who truly needs, for her fellow countryman.In the begging everything was fine, but one day everything start to fall apart. Boho yes was able to see beyond this veil, but it can be seen swell, so creature and bad people wanted to use her ability for their shadies schemes for power or freedom. The more she became popular the more she was in danger. Her father and her Mother understand it very fast the problem when her shop was burned by someone who didn’t like her work and the waste of her talent. So with the help of the town her family and her flew to New York where they live now. Boho is searching an answer to Whom want her power. She is uncertain on what she want, on one side she would like to return to her town to her home and if it means to renounce her Sight so be it. On the other it would be against what her family pushed for, For helping the people who are suffering. So she is now fighting to answer on what to do. Renounce her power or fight back with every allies she can gather.


it can be upgraded. I’m Italian so I would like an Italian character and my English is bad, you can tell me if you like it or not
 
i add one last thing to her character for the bad omen and struggle to get accepted, she fight with the right, but punches with the left, indicating that she was Left handed before being corrected, a thing that italy we do and, using the right hand, in some animation for the ability she could use the left hand
 
I think the 1 is fantastic in setup. I think the rest of the kit is too similar though. I think our respective kits for Boho should be combined.
I can understand why you say the rest of the kit is similar but i prefer how my abilties mixed and play with each others, (exept the 2), but your desing is cool really cool a debuffer, i like a character whom kit plays on their story. my only suggestion is to make your redesign play araoudn her story if you have one
 
I can understand why you say the rest of the kit is similar but i prefer how my abilties mixed and play with each others, (exept the 2), but your desing is cool really cool a debuffer, i like a character whom kit plays on their story. my only suggestion is to make your redesign play araoudn her story if you have one
Tbh I think the only thing to contribute at this stage is abilities. If a certain play style seems good to add to the game, then we can add whatever art or story to that kit. Other people seem to prioritize art over abilities, and I don't think that makes sense.
 
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