Sheretz, The Swarm of Bugs, and A Supportive Front Liner

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Here is the finalized post for my hero concept, Sheretz, with a commission to finally show off her character design!

(Amazing art by Mia L. on Fiverr! https://www.fiverr.com/s/Ayajem4)

Her Playstyle:

Sheretz is designed to be a frontline support character, with emphasis on transporting teammates and herself in and out of team fights, and dealing large bursts of spirit damage or healing with her abilities. When not using her abilities, her melee benefits and powerful hand-cannon type gun would allow her to secure kills. Her stacking mechanic would reward both playing riskily on the front lines taking major damage to level up her abilities, as well as utilizing her support abilities to keep the damage that sustains her own offensive capabilities from destroying her. As an aside, I considered making the amount of damage required for a stack of Peel Away scale with boon level to keep the rate of stacks gained in a fight rather consistent throughout the length of a match.

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Ability Utlization:

Ability One:
Starting with Bugs and Bandages. This ability obviously requires you to be within close range of your opponents, and while it may be complicated to read at first, you'll notice that this ability has two enhancements gained from Peel Away, in opposing directions. This means that while having less stacks will allow you to deal more burst damage, it will also speed up the cooldown of this ability, and in contrast, having more stacks will allow you to heal yourself and allies within the radius more, and this radius will also increase with more stacks, once again encouraging usage of support abilities, and providing an interesting ultimatum where the player must decide between aiming for more stacks during a fight, and being able to provide more healing at less frequent intervals, or dishing out more damage, at more common intervals. This may also mean that the spirit scaling of this ability may need some tweaking.
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Ability Two:
Secondly, her textile transmission ability. This ability would mainly be used for engaging in fights, or simply expediting rotation around the map, as disengaging when in a non-optimal position for not taking damage would obviously get you stunned for a long time. This could, however, find interesting use as an escape tool if combined with Unstoppable. This also again provides an interesting choice for the player, as keeping stacks while preparing to engage a fight provides a much more likely chance of being able to severely stun and damage your opponents upon entry, but also opens up the possibility of being caught off your guard and killed very quickly.
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Ability Three:
Thirdly, Peel Away. This ability is obviously the core of her kit that forces choices of how to utilize her skills in the moment upon the player. The active form of this ability obviously is a major player in that, providing the player with the option to keep or reduce their stacks depending on what they think best in the moment. It also allows for manual regeneration, however since stacks are acquired before their subsequent damage increase is calculated, the regeneration to damage taken ration of rewrapping 20 stacks will be exponentially less than that of rewrapping only one. This may pair well even with Blood Tribute, if one wishes to gain stacks on their own time in preparation of a fight. The silence and disarm effects caused by this ability also make it something that should be used with good timing in battle, so as to avoid being unable to secure a kill, or being caught unable to heal when in need. Whether rewrapping should actively slow, or speed up the player is debatable, and while I did grant an increase in speed and stamina regeneration in the ability description, I could see a case to be made for the exact opposite effect to be applied.
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Ultimate Ability:
Fourthly and finally, her ultimate, Swarm. This ability has several main usages and possible ways to take advantage of it's mechanics. It's most blaringly obvious usage is to drag an enemy into her range for attack, this could prove useful for isolating a target from a teamfight, or even securing/forcefully engaging an opponent in a 1v1 scenario, in both of these scenarios it would benefit from being used in tandem with Slowing Hex. The other obvious use cases are to simply send out several swarms during a team fight to draw enemy fire, wreak havoc among them, heal allies, or pull allies from the fight back to safety. Less obviously, it can be combined with speedy transport options such as Majestic Leap, a Doorman's portals, or simply her own Textile Transmission, to move several enemies, or more likely, allies at once, as the swarm will follow Sheretz' location. The ultimate may require an additional effect to be granted to it that decreases the stamina regeneration of enemies within it in order to make it more viable, but I believe for now that it would be a well balanced ability.
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Her Personality:
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Sheretz loved her job at OSIC, and was infatuated with artifacts of all kinds, making her the skilled curator that she was.

She has always loved bugs, which is one of the main reasons she was able to come to terms with her transformation, and she is capable of naming the scientific name of every single bug that can be found within her swarm, the number of which she herself states to be several hundred.

She says that despite the immense pain she went through in her death, the hours that it lasted, and the humanity she lost, she prefers to look towards the future than dwell on the past. She purports to be as human as she needs, though she does harbor some despair about both the loss of her form.

She hopes to be one day able to return to the OSIC with greater control over her swarm, and even the ability to utilize it as an asset in her work. She is often ashamed and saddened by having been forced to leave the OSIC, and this hope of return is what drives her, making it also the driving factor behind her philosopher of focusing on the future and ignoring the past and what she's lost, even if the latter half isn't fully healthy.

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I would also like to expand the number of OSIC employees in the ritual, I have a concept character "Thorn", a siege - tank - defender. I haven't posted him yet, but the point is that he's also a member of the OSIC organization
 
I like the look of the character and the lore part, but it seems there are too many ways to heal allies in the abilities
Really? I was kind of thinking of maybe tuning down the boon scaling for Textile Transmission, but I suppose having healing nova and rescue beam somewhat built in in combination with the current healrh heaking might be a bit much, so night it just be better to change the 3rd level for ability two entirely?
 
I would also like to expand the number of OSIC employees in the ritual, I have a concept character "Thorn", a siege - tank - defender. I haven't posted him yet, but the point is that he's also a member of the OSIC organization
I do think it needs to be expanded upon, originally I was going to make Sheretz an agent of Paradox herself, until I heard the specific voiceline between Haze and Graves mentioning the curator branch and I realized the path I could take instead.
 
Really? I was kind of thinking of maybe tuning down the boon scaling for Textile Transmission, but I suppose having healing nova and rescue beam somewhat built in in combination with the current healrh heaking might be a bit much, so night it just be better to change the 3rd level for ability two entirely?
Yes, it might be worth giving her a different leveling method
 
I do think it needs to be expanded upon, originally I was going to make Sheretz an agent of Paradox herself, until I heard the specific voiceline between Haze and Graves mentioning the curator branch and I realized the path I could take instead.
If you look at Haze's dialogues with other characters, she often suggests that the participants of the ritual join the ranks of OSIC
 
Overall, great hero concept. Hope it gets added.
Thanks! I'm hoping it'll get more veiws, I also posted it to the sub but oddly enough it's been getting a much lower rate of veiws than my other two non-finished posts about the character that don't even include the concept art 😭
 
Thanks! I'm hoping it'll get more veiws, I also posted it to the sub but oddly enough it's been getting a much lower rate of veiws than my other two non-finished posts about the character that don't even include the concept art 😭
Yeah, the thing is that you just need to reply your finalize version to the original thread you posted first. Creating another thread is redundant when you already have an existing thread of the same content. Just like how I did in my own hero thread, I just post any updates I have by replying to the original thread rather than posting another.
 
Name could use some work but very cool idea.
What name do you think would be better? I know it may not be obvious because it's based in somewhat niche etymology and linguistics, but I chose Sheretz because it's a Hebrew term used in the Bible for creepy crawlies, and she's inspired directly by the plague of gnats upon Moses, hence finding the idol within the tomb of Rameses II, her human name, Vanessa, just means butterfly, with Moreau obviously being a reference to The Island of Dr Moreau.
 
Very cool hero design! I like the idea of another OSIC (even if she's a former agent) that shows more to the organisation beyond the Sandmen. I assume she would be friends with Haze? How would she talk to Paradox? Especially on the same team.

With the wish, what exactly is she wishing for to destroy them? Would more common people dislike her for going after Paradox while the more affluent like her? Would she get support, and how would Paradox react? Do they not stop her, because somehow they know she can't do it as they still exist?

I like the name personally. I get the reference. I like when names have references.
 
Very cool hero design! I like the idea of another OSIC (even if she's a former agent) that shows more to the organisation beyond the Sandmen. I assume she would be friends with Haze? How would she talk to Paradox? Especially on the same team.

With the wish, what exactly is she wishing for to destroy them? Would more common people dislike her for going after Paradox while the more affluent like her? Would she get support, and how would Paradox react? Do they not stop her, because somehow they know she can't do it as they still exist?

I like the name personally. I get the reference. I like when names have references.
Thank you! Yeah I would hope that she would be friends with Haze. I had a few ideas for character interactions that I didn't post here, including that Haze and Sheretz were great friends but haven't seen eachother since her retirement due to Sheretz's withdrawal from society in the years since, I had another one between Venator and her where he mentions the Tola'ath, which if you understood the reference in her name you may get this one as well, but essentially the Tola'ath is mentioned in Psalms 22 in comparison to Jesus, as an insect that has a similar life cycle to the events celebrated by Easter, and thus represents hope in death, so of course Venator would say something along the lines of "Have you heard the meaning of thd Tola'ath, lass?" To which Sheretz would respond, "Kermes Ilicis, of course." and he would then say, "I hope death hasn't made you lose hope."

As for her plans and appeal, I would think that Paradox is nearly impossible to destroy considering their mastery over time, unless you got an entity external to time to do it for you, which is why her hail Mary pass is to ask the patrons. She would probably be aware that even this might not work, and I would imagine that her interactions with Paradox would not actually be that hostile. Since looking to the future and moving on from the past is one of her main character themes, she would most likely recognize that not only is it not the same Paradox agent, but even if it were it's more important to finish the ritual and get her wish, there would more so be banter like Sheretz saying that Paradox will be out of a job when all of this is through, and then Paradox responding with some assurance that even the patrons mastery over time can't cancel out theirs. Also, by destroying Paradox, that would likely just entail disbanding them and removing their time manipulating capabilities.

I also would guess that the rest of the cast wouldn't have a major opinion on her goals, her main reason isn't for revenge, but because she simply just loves artifacts, and would rather they either remain untouched, or are displayed in proper museums. Characters like Dynamo who mention going to Paradox's showings I'm sure would not be aligned against her because of how morally acceptable the goal is, and I would assume characters that like Paradox wouldn't dislike Sheretz just because of her goals, and really, Paradox and Sheretz aren't fighting over majorly evil crimes such as genocide, it's mostly just Paradox making money versus artifacts being on showing for the world, so I personally couldn't see much tension between them or her and the rest of the cast.

Anyways thank you so much for the questions! I hope this thread gets more I love talking about her and would really like to see more people who'd love the idea get sight of it!
 
Thank you! Yeah I would hope that she would be friends with Haze. I had a few ideas for character interactions that I didn't post here, including that Haze and Sheretz were great friends but haven't seen eachother since her retirement due to Sheretz's withdrawal from society in the years since, I had another one between Venator and her where he mentions the Tola'ath, which if you understood the reference in her name you may get this one as well, but essentially the Tola'ath is mentioned in Psalms 22 in comparison to Jesus, as an insect that has a similar life cycle to the events celebrated by Easter, and thus represents hope in death, so of course Venator would say something along the lines of "Have you heard the meaning of thd Tola'ath, lass?" To which Sheretz would respond, "Kermes Ilicis, of course." and he would then say, "I hope death hasn't made you lose hope."

As for her plans and appeal, I would think that Paradox is nearly impossible to destroy considering their mastery over time, unless you got an entity external to time to do it for you, which is why her hail Mary pass is to ask the patrons. She would probably be aware that even this might not work, and I would imagine that her interactions with Paradox would not actually be that hostile. Since looking to the future and moving on from the past is one of her main character themes, she would most likely recognize that not only is it not the same Paradox agent, but even if it were it's more important to finish the ritual and get her wish, there would more so be banter like Sheretz saying that Paradox will be out of a job when all of this is through, and then Paradox responding with some assurance that even the patrons mastery over time can't cancel out theirs. Also, by destroying Paradox, that would likely just entail disbanding them and removing their time manipulating capabilities.

I also would guess that the rest of the cast wouldn't have a major opinion on her goals, her main reason isn't for revenge, but because she simply just loves artifacts, and would rather they either remain untouched, or are displayed in proper museums. Characters like Dynamo who mention going to Paradox's showings I'm sure would not be aligned against her because of how morally acceptable the goal is, and I would assume characters that like Paradox wouldn't dislike Sheretz just because of her goals, and really, Paradox and Sheretz aren't fighting over majorly evil crimes such as genocide, it's mostly just Paradox making money versus artifacts being on showing for the world, so I personally couldn't see much tension between them or her and the rest of the cast.

Anyways thank you so much for the questions! I hope this thread gets more I love talking about her and would really like to see more people who'd love the idea get sight of it!
With Venator, that's a damn good reference. I really like Venator and we need more religious ones. It doesn't have to tie to this character, I think it would be really funny if Venator was more okay and supportive of Sheretz before she reveals she's a Protestant, not Catholic. That causes him to go >_>.

I like the idea that she doesn't even know it can work but does so anyway. I do think she would know that they are different Paradox agents though. What you can explore thematically is that both are oddly similar. Think about it, she's a 'hive mind' of bugs working together to a greater goal. Paradox is a group of individuals who all don the mask and call themselves the same name, Paradox. Isn't that similar?

I can see her in the end, if she can't destroy them with the Wish, she wishes for knowledge on their organisation instead to slowly go after them individually. Or she decides screw it, I'm going to pull a heist on these thieves and steal all the artefacts back.

With characters!
I can see Seven encourage her to master her form and become something 'more' than human. Similar to Dynamo and he respects her for not throwing her new form away via the Patrons.

I can see her show curiosity over Apollo's blade and culture, wanting to eventually do a proper museum where Earth can see Ixian history.

With Mo and Krill, I can see her disapprove of them as they are smugglers.
 
I do like the idea of Sheretz being a protestant, of course because I myself am one, and so alot of references and morals are tied into her character and lore, and I also think that she would indeed have some great lines with Venator. I could also of course see the case to be made about there being too many Christian references in the game and not enough representation for other religions, and would be fine if it were to be left at just the references, but I think I personally would prefer that route because it'd build alot of nice character. Especially as a genius woman in the 1950s, supporting the Protestant faith would most likely include alot of Quaker ideals and make her a pretty wholesome, supportive, and inclusive character to the rest of the characters.

I think that she'd probably go down the route of trying to just return as many artifacts as she could to public museums.

I definitely do believe Seven would say something like that to her, I really love his character trait of encouraging others to become perfect versions of themselves and spite their connection with the rest of civilization, and it'd be a great conversation. With Dynamo it'd be awesome seeing them talk about the loss of their bodies, and pretty cool to see the contrast between Sheretz being superficially apathetic towards it, whereas Dynamo loudly proclaims that the one thing on Earth he wants back is his body, and maybe him telling her it's okay to mourn even if she has bigger issues to fix than what she's mourning. With Apollo I could see some funny conversations to where she asks about setting up a museum like that, or getting mystical Ixian trinkets for inspection, and Apollo then bragging about how great Ixia is, that'd be hilarious, and it would also definitely be cool to see her interacting with Mo And Krill, she definitely would disapprove of them entirely, but I don't think she'd really hate them as much as she would discourage their line of work and tell them that she'll someday need to intervene lmao.
 
I do like the idea of Sheretz being a protestant, of course because I myself am one, and so alot of references and morals are tied into her character and lore, and I also think that she would indeed have some great lines with Venator. I could also of course see the case to be made about there being too many Christian references in the game and not enough representation for other religions, and would be fine if it were to be left at just the references, but I think I personally would prefer that route because it'd build alot of nice character. Especially as a genius woman in the 1950s, supporting the Protestant faith would most likely include alot of Quaker ideals and make her a pretty wholesome, supportive, and inclusive character to the rest of the characters.

I think that she'd probably go down the route of trying to just return as many artifacts as she could to public museums.

I definitely do believe Seven would say something like that to her, I really love his character trait of encouraging others to become perfect versions of themselves and spite their connection with the rest of civilization, and it'd be a great conversation. With Dynamo it'd be awesome seeing them talk about the loss of their bodies, and pretty cool to see the contrast between Sheretz being superficially apathetic towards it, whereas Dynamo loudly proclaims that the one thing on Earth he wants back is his body, and maybe him telling her it's okay to mourn even if she has bigger issues to fix than what she's mourning. With Apollo I could see some funny conversations to where she asks about setting up a museum like that, or getting mystical Ixian trinkets for inspection, and Apollo then bragging about how great Ixia is, that'd be hilarious, and it would also definitely be cool to see her interacting with Mo And Krill, she definitely would disapprove of them entirely, but I don't think she'd really hate them as much as she would discourage their line of work and tell them that she'll someday need to intervene lmao.
I am of the faith as well, and not Catholic. I love Venator for being an actual character and not a stereotype. Exploring the Quakers hasn't been done in a game I believe. I think she can contrast herself with Venator by having the focus on forgiveness and absolution. For instance, she supports Shiv compared to Venator who doesn't believe he has changed. She is similar to Paige where she sees the best in people.
"Why do you hang out with such...low life?"
"With whom did He walk, with the rich or the poor and sick?"
"You make people sick with how you look."

I think we could just have more religious characters in games (we can have a Sunni and Buddhist for instance) and it would be cool to see them respect each other in the game.

With her returning the artefacts, that's my point. How? Where are they being stored? In the Paradox museum? In a vault they share or do they have seperate ones? I just think it could be a funny comment of Paradox where she points out she's trying to do a grand theft in her eyes to get back the artefacts.

With more character dynamics:

I can see her offer consolation to Viktor and mention how she is also made out many distinct parts. Maybe she does feel a strange pain and sensation constantly as she's not a simple physical being anymore, and has to constantly focus to maintain her form.

With Silver, I can see Silver make a comment on fleas and how they should stay apart before Sheretz tells her she's actually made out of [insert real bug names here]. Silver just goes: "You just spouted what sounded like a spell. A bug's a bug."

Does Sheretz sleep? What would Rem say to her?

Drifter can express disappointment over her lack of blood and flesh to eat.
 
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