[HERO IDEA] - Rex, Agent of Timekeepers (with gifs and details)

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Reworked design after some feedback
I like the new one much better! a bit crazy expression fits his equally crazy abilities, a little bit less colorful but not every hero has to be whole walking palette! The old one looks fancy but eh, generic rich asshole vibe or something.
Love the kit too, really interesting way of healing (screw one fed enemy) and finally a support that helps ally mages too! interesting concept overall. I def wish it to be in Deadlock roster!!11
 
He looks delightful. How would he interact with a character like Paradox which also have time-based abilities?
 
Pretty sure Dynamo would ask for the Time Keeper's title, to be more respectful and courteous and formal. "Mr...?"
"Rex, you can call me Rex"

And he could be like "Alright, Rex, I'm just trying to do my job. Is this going to be a problem?"

Haze probably would say "Just hope you know, I'm watching..."

Other than that. Perfect interactions. I can literally hear them and has that Deadlock peppy feel to it. Iconic Valve secret sauce. Great work!
 
posted some possible interactions
I like the presentation! Love the character icon.

1) There's various typos and grammatical errors in some conversations (life advises for example).
2) Some character interactions are great like Paige, Lash, and Rem. Good job with those!
3) Some characters I think sound stilted, like Bebop saying "that is quite sad." or Doorman "This is reassuring." (I can see it being "How reassuring..." instead).
 
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