Hero - Derby Queen
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supremejester28
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That's a lot of text. I like the idea behind the abilities. Good job!
based on 'another alt fire shotgun bruiser'
derby queen
primary - https://wiki.teamfortress.com/wiki/Shortstop a fast 'shotgun pistol' that can knock you back at very close range to balance it compared to shiv shotgun
alt fire - shove enemies or push off terrain and zoom outward rather than in
1 - burning backflip - backflip and send a projectile forward, on hit deals spirit damage along the path it traveled and melee damage to the main target. hitting a wall during the backflip causes a second backflip.
2 - reckless lunge - hold down to lunge headlong, pushing enemies away from the first enemy hit then mantle over the target. can target walls to leap onto them then perform the attack across the wall.
3 - rollerblader - gain increased fire rate and reduced reload time while airborne and the momentum of jumps or dashes is maintained briefly after landing.
4 - roller derby - send out a spirit squad that fans out from your position and reconverges around the nearest enemy hero to your crosshairs, can reactivate to manually set a different point. enemies take spirit damage and are pushed out of the way of each spirit squad member.
Nezantra
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KitschSkip
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I love the idea of bringing back the hmc momentum as part of a hero's kit 
that's so fun!
that's so fun!yeah this game has so much movement tech i thought it would be fun to have a character that can chain movement techs and get an offensive boost as a reward so the hero can work as a mobile shotgun brawler.I love the idea of bringing back the hmc momentum as part of a hero's kit
accolades from reddit:
“Dude I love the design for Derby Queen, also bunnyhoping.” - FaithlessnessDry8520
“Oooo i like the roller rink character hell ya, also roller skates became popular in 1880 so its perfect!” - Unable-Recording-796
“Derby Queen would be my new main omg high mobility flashy bunnyhopping girl on rollerblades she hits every single bell for me” - Azurabbit
“Where have we seen Derby Queen concept? Sounds absolutely genius, do we know anything else about her” - Warp_spark
“Derby, you mean derpy.” - Vinven
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quick image to show the personality off
wip a fate’s tale - the witches of the soho coven use games for magic. some prefer pickup games of bunco over wine, using the results to divine future events or fulfill spells. others prefer things to be much faster paced, and mix some elbows and blood in with the magic. and so, the roller derby scene in new york came to be dominated by the soho smash. the coven’s former leader was so engrossed in the sport that she was ousted by the others, leaving her to fight and reclaim her title.
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maxkaibarreto
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Princess Junker Queen + Lucio is a vibe: But where’s the punish window (let alone its signal) for opponents? Without those, balancing sands the fun crunchy edges off a hero’s play space
More movement interplay from the kit’s basics with wall sliding as the ult would be, while a lazy fix, an answer to what I’m getting at
More movement interplay from the kit’s basics with wall sliding as the ult would be, while a lazy fix, an answer to what I’m getting at
the ulti is a very loud punish window, its also designed to be particularly easy to dodge if you can break line of sight.
2 has a cooldown unlike lucio passive, and it is a multi tool where it can be used on floors. if she uses it offensively to chase on the ground she has to wait to use it on a wall. using it on a wall means she has to wait to use it again while potentially out of position.
3 lets her keep the 1 and 2 speed briefly, but that can be punished too with any of the cc the game offers can lock her down hard. slowing hex and chain gang being the most punishing.
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A Fate’s Tale - The witches of the SoHo Coven use games for magic. Some prefer pickup games of Bunco over wine, using the results to divine future events or fulfill spells. Others prefer things to be much faster paced, and mix some elbows and blood in with the magic. And so, the roller derby scene in the Cursed Apple came to be dominated by the SoHo Smash. The SoHo Coven’s former Headmistress, Regina Molenzo, was so engrossed in the sport that she was ousted by the others. While she supposes simply beating Bonnie Holly’s face in would restore her as Headmistress, getting the Patron to kill
her outright would be much better.
Select Lines
“I’ll make this city my roller rink.”
“Welcome to the roller derby!”
“I’m here to leave some bruises!”
“Not what you expected a witch to look like? That’s your problem!”
“I brought my own team with me! And some rollerblades!”
“There’s no speed limit for me!”
“They’re gonna get the royal elbow to their face today.”
“Bonnie Holly can screw herself, I’m still the headmistress of the SoHo Coven no matter how many dice rolls in Bunco say otherwise!”
“Why ride a broom to fly when you can bewitch some roller skates instead?”
“Nobody can keep up with me!”
“I’m pushy, deal with it.”
“I’m taking their teeth.”
“They’re going to learn what it means to fight like a girl.”
Deselect Lines
“BoHo probably bewitched you to do that!”
“[blows raspberry]”
“[armpit fart]”
“[belches then makes an exaggerated blowing noise]”
“Making me want to elbow you.”
“You wanna get kicked in the face?”
“Fine, stay in the slow lane, but stay outta my way.”
“I’ll get some beers with the ladies down at Jezebel’s instead.”
“I’m running some practices down at the roller rink.”
“I… Ugh I do roller skating lessons for kids in the afternoon.”
“Haha yeah I’ve got so much better to do… like babysit tonight.”
“It takes longer than you think to skate home.”
“I’ve got a derby to catch.”
“I can get what I want way easier than wishing for it, I’ll just jump Bonnie and break her face!”
“I really worry about my sister Molly, she hasn’t written back from prison in a while, maybe I should go make a visit instead.”
“Guess you like to get pushed around and jumped over, huh?”
Upgrade Ability 1
“Limbering up.”
“Time for some fun.”
“The acrobatics are easy, but evoking the runes on the wheels of my blades, not so
much.”
“They’ll flip out.”
“I can do a backflip!”
“Lemme stretch.”
“I can do a backflip, then rebound right at them!”
“Should have just brought my soccer uniform
instead.”
Using Ability 1
“Backflip!”
“Firelance!”
“Blazing Backflip!”
“Evoking Fire!”
Ability 1 Rebound Flip
“Woohoo!”
“Yeah!”
“Let’s do that again!”
“Double backflip!”
“Flip it again!”
Upgrading Ability 2
“I’m going to block them from my team.”
“This is going to get bloody.”
“I’m bored. Let’s see how fast I can rearrange some faces.”
“I want teeth.”
“I’ll vault right over the enemy.”
“I’m an all-terrain mean girl.”
“They are really going to regret not bringing roller skates.”
“I skate right around any obstacles.”
“True glory is when you jump over their heads, then run a lap around then rink to
get ‘em from behind and push them again.”
Using Ability 2 No Target
“Haha!”
“Ahahah!”
“Faster!”
Ability 2 Wall Target
“Here we go!”
“Ha ha ha ha, yeah!”
“This city can’t hold me!”
“Wall grinding!”
Ability 2 Hit Enemy Hero
“Coming through!”
“Outta my way!”
“Hey, I’m skating here!”
“Crush you!”
“Overhead strike!”
“Mess you up!”
Upgrade Ability 3
“There’s no speed limit for me!”
“Not all witches fly on brooms.”
“You can’t pull tricks like this on a broom!”
“They’ll be eating mu dust.”
“Pick up the pace.”
her outright would be much better.
Select Lines
“I’ll make this city my roller rink.”
“Welcome to the roller derby!”
“I’m here to leave some bruises!”
“Not what you expected a witch to look like? That’s your problem!”
“I brought my own team with me! And some rollerblades!”
“There’s no speed limit for me!”
“They’re gonna get the royal elbow to their face today.”
“Bonnie Holly can screw herself, I’m still the headmistress of the SoHo Coven no matter how many dice rolls in Bunco say otherwise!”
“Why ride a broom to fly when you can bewitch some roller skates instead?”
“Nobody can keep up with me!”
“I’m pushy, deal with it.”
“I’m taking their teeth.”
“They’re going to learn what it means to fight like a girl.”
Deselect Lines
“BoHo probably bewitched you to do that!”
“[blows raspberry]”
“[armpit fart]”
“[belches then makes an exaggerated blowing noise]”
“Making me want to elbow you.”
“You wanna get kicked in the face?”
“Fine, stay in the slow lane, but stay outta my way.”
“I’ll get some beers with the ladies down at Jezebel’s instead.”
“I’m running some practices down at the roller rink.”
“I… Ugh I do roller skating lessons for kids in the afternoon.”
“Haha yeah I’ve got so much better to do… like babysit tonight.”
“It takes longer than you think to skate home.”
“I’ve got a derby to catch.”
“I can get what I want way easier than wishing for it, I’ll just jump Bonnie and break her face!”
“I really worry about my sister Molly, she hasn’t written back from prison in a while, maybe I should go make a visit instead.”
“Guess you like to get pushed around and jumped over, huh?”
Upgrade Ability 1
“Limbering up.”
“Time for some fun.”
“The acrobatics are easy, but evoking the runes on the wheels of my blades, not so
much.”
“They’ll flip out.”
“I can do a backflip!”
“Lemme stretch.”
“I can do a backflip, then rebound right at them!”
“Should have just brought my soccer uniform
instead.”
Using Ability 1
“Backflip!”
“Firelance!”
“Blazing Backflip!”
“Evoking Fire!”
Ability 1 Rebound Flip
“Woohoo!”
“Yeah!”
“Let’s do that again!”
“Double backflip!”
“Flip it again!”
Upgrading Ability 2
“I’m going to block them from my team.”
“This is going to get bloody.”
“I’m bored. Let’s see how fast I can rearrange some faces.”
“I want teeth.”
“I’ll vault right over the enemy.”
“I’m an all-terrain mean girl.”
“They are really going to regret not bringing roller skates.”
“I skate right around any obstacles.”
“True glory is when you jump over their heads, then run a lap around then rink to
get ‘em from behind and push them again.”
Using Ability 2 No Target
“Haha!”
“Ahahah!”
“Faster!”
Ability 2 Wall Target
“Here we go!”
“Ha ha ha ha, yeah!”
“This city can’t hold me!”
“Wall grinding!”
Ability 2 Hit Enemy Hero
“Coming through!”
“Outta my way!”
“Hey, I’m skating here!”
“Crush you!”
“Overhead strike!”
“Mess you up!”
Upgrade Ability 3
“There’s no speed limit for me!”
“Not all witches fly on brooms.”
“You can’t pull tricks like this on a broom!”
“They’ll be eating mu dust.”
“Pick up the pace.”
Ability 3 Going Past 25m/s
“Woo woo woo yeah!”
“Faster!”
“Hoo hoo hahaha!”
“Shredding the street!”
“Buckle up, buttercup!”
“Awoooyeah!”
“Hahaha roll baby roll!”
Ability 3 Long Airtime
“Heeheehahaha woo woo!”
“Raaaghyeah!”
“Woo hahah!”
“No one’s catching me!”
“Nice view!”
“Mhm!”
“Oh yeah oh yeah!”
“Awooowoo!”
Upgrading Ability 4
“I’ve got friends here in spirit.”
“[blows sharply into whistle] Did I getcha?”
“My team down at the rink have some damn good spells.”
“I brought my own team.”
“You thought I was hard to handle?”
“Where I go, a coven follows!”
“The ladies on my team can come at a moment’s notice.”
“This city’s just one big roller park!”
“[blows the main jingle of the opening theme into the whistle] Hahaha!”
“Let’s get to the derby!”
“[blows the starting bass drop of the match queue theme into the whistle]”
Using Ability 4 (these lines are proceeded by the whistle being used, this sound is global)
“SoHo Smash, assemble!”
“Let’s take ‘em down to SoHo, ladies.”
“Let’s have some fun!”
“Showtime, ladies!”
“Let’s show them why I rule!”
“These are my streets.”
“Bow down before your new queen!”
“Let’s knock some teeth in, ladies!”
“Elbows to their ribs, ladies!”
“Try and keep up!”
Ability 4 Manual Target
“Close in!”
“[quick blow into whistle]”
“I caught a live one!”
“SoHo Smash, slam it!”
“Get ‘em, girls!”
Ability 4 Direct Hit by All
“Slammed ya!”
“Get body blocked.”
“Blam!”
“Nailed!”
“Eat elbows!”
Hero Kill
“There was nowhere to hide!”
“Got beaten by girl!”
“Broke your ribs and shot ya!”
“You greased up my blades!”
“Smashed you good.”
“Alleyoop!”
“Blew you to bits!”
“Face, meet elbow!”
“Hard to run with a broken spine!”
“You can’t even fight like a girl!”
“Sissy!”
“Awew you gonna cry?”
“Suck it up, Sally!”
“Woo woo woo yeah!”
“Faster!”
“Hoo hoo hahaha!”
“Shredding the street!”
“Buckle up, buttercup!”
“Awoooyeah!”
“Hahaha roll baby roll!”
Ability 3 Long Airtime
“Heeheehahaha woo woo!”
“Raaaghyeah!”
“Woo hahah!”
“No one’s catching me!”
“Nice view!”
“Mhm!”
“Oh yeah oh yeah!”
“Awooowoo!”
Upgrading Ability 4
“I’ve got friends here in spirit.”
“[blows sharply into whistle] Did I getcha?”
“My team down at the rink have some damn good spells.”
“I brought my own team.”
“You thought I was hard to handle?”
“Where I go, a coven follows!”
“The ladies on my team can come at a moment’s notice.”
“This city’s just one big roller park!”
“[blows the main jingle of the opening theme into the whistle] Hahaha!”
“Let’s get to the derby!”
“[blows the starting bass drop of the match queue theme into the whistle]”
Using Ability 4 (these lines are proceeded by the whistle being used, this sound is global)
“SoHo Smash, assemble!”
“Let’s take ‘em down to SoHo, ladies.”
“Let’s have some fun!”
“Showtime, ladies!”
“Let’s show them why I rule!”
“These are my streets.”
“Bow down before your new queen!”
“Let’s knock some teeth in, ladies!”
“Elbows to their ribs, ladies!”
“Try and keep up!”
Ability 4 Manual Target
“Close in!”
“[quick blow into whistle]”
“I caught a live one!”
“SoHo Smash, slam it!”
“Get ‘em, girls!”
Ability 4 Direct Hit by All
“Slammed ya!”
“Get body blocked.”
“Blam!”
“Nailed!”
“Eat elbows!”
Hero Kill
“There was nowhere to hide!”
“Got beaten by girl!”
“Broke your ribs and shot ya!”
“You greased up my blades!”
“Smashed you good.”
“Alleyoop!”
“Blew you to bits!”
“Face, meet elbow!”
“Hard to run with a broken spine!”
“You can’t even fight like a girl!”
“Sissy!”
“Awew you gonna cry?”
“Suck it up, Sally!”
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