Full Hero Concept: Heart (Cursed Scottish Golden Retriever)

[commonbleat]

all art and stuff made by me, pretty much everything explained in the image
also i didn't mention it but she has a scottish accent

i tried to make her fit the setting and also have a reason to actually be with the patrons and such, and also tried to make abilities that would take advantage of the unique things about deadlock as a game like being a 3D ARTS so that's why there's anti-air and a fun movement ability that goes in any 3D direction

as for why a cursed scottish golden retriever, the game's setting starts and is shortly after the golden retrievers are developed as a breed in scotland (around 1860-70) and i think the idea of unsheathing your heart as a sword is cool

 

[Chilla9001]

nice art, I think she could be made to look a little more animalistic, but its still quite nice.
Cool kit! I think some effects could altered, like Duck hunt dealing 200% to target in the air instead forcing them to the ground, since characters like Vindicta and to a lesser extent Grey Talon have flying movement as a core mechanic in their kit, and removing it that easily would make her more anti-fun than an actual counter to those characters.
Drill Flurry and Heartache are pretty cool, but I'm not sure I understand fully how Punishment works, specifically how youre supposed to live if youre taking 200 spirit dmg per second

 

[commonbleat]

nice art, I think she could be made to look a little more animalistic, but its still quite nice.
Cool kit! I think some effects could altered, like Duck hunt dealing 200% to target in the air instead forcing them to the ground, since characters like Vindicta and to a lesser extent Grey Talon have flying movement as a core mechanic in their kit, and removing it that easily would make her more anti-fun than an actual counter to those characters.
Drill Flurry and Heartache are pretty cool, but I'm not sure I understand fully how Punishment works, specifically how youre supposed to live if youre taking 200 spirit dmg per second

i tried to word duck hunt in a way that it wouldn't completely shutdown vindicta/talon's fly, without the tier 3 upgrade it wouldn't actually make them fall down, it just stops their momentum for a moment
also i overestimated how much damage would 200 spirit per second be because the ability was different at first, it should probably be more like 100 (20 spirit would be enough to remediate the damage because of the heartache pulses and health regen) and also you should take no self-damage when meeleing under its effects