I recommend putting their names because I had to think a bit on why Dynamo would like a criminal. I assume it's Drifter but having a Dynamo conversation then a Drifter convo where both are D made me for a second go O_O.
I don't know how much swearing we can have in the game (it is there) but I can see Bludson swearing more.
Like the Graves conversation I imagine:
"You're trying to steal her!"
"It's necromancy shit, of course I'm trying to steal her."
With Yamato
"I know fuck-all of Japanese Kaori, speak American."
I also think Bludson would know Infernus' past as Infernus was a criminal.
With the Drifter convo, I'd change it slightly
"Why ya tie yourself down with a gang Blud?"
"I like doing what I want."
"You like being a street criminal?"
"Vampire society got too boring. Couldn't return to my old life, so might as well start a new one."
"*That one Drifter laugh* I like you little man."