Character Concept: Blutson (Mafia - Mutilation - Mosquitos)

I recommend putting their names because I had to think a bit on why Dynamo would like a criminal. I assume it's Drifter but having a Dynamo conversation then a Drifter convo where both are D made me for a second go O_O.

I don't know how much swearing we can have in the game (it is there) but I can see Bludson swearing more.
Like the Graves conversation I imagine:
"You're trying to steal her!"
"It's necromancy shit, of course I'm trying to steal her."
With Yamato
"I know fuck-all of Japanese Kaori, speak American."

I also think Bludson would know Infernus' past as Infernus was a criminal.

With the Drifter convo, I'd change it slightly
"Why ya tie yourself down with a gang Blud?"
"I like doing what I want."
"You like being a street criminal?"
"Vampire society got too boring. Couldn't return to my old life, so might as well start a new one."
"*That one Drifter laugh* I like you little man."
 
I recommend putting their names because I had to think a bit on why Dynamo would like a criminal. I assume it's Drifter but having a Dynamo conversation then a Drifter convo where both are D made me for a second go O_O.

I don't know how much swearing we can have in the game (it is there) but I can see Bludson swearing more.
Like the Graves conversation I imagine:
"You're trying to steal her!"
"It's necromancy shit, of course I'm trying to steal her."
With Yamato
"I know fuck-all of Japanese Kaori, speak American."

I also think Bludson would know Infernus' past as Infernus was a criminal.

With the Drifter convo, I'd change it slightly
"Why ya tie yourself down with a gang Blud?"
"I like doing what I want."
"You like being a street criminal?"
"Vampire society got too boring. Couldn't return to my old life, so might as well start a new one."
"*That one Drifter laugh* I like you little man."
He's very respectable to people he knows, but to those he doesn't know, he's rather aloof and assholish

He knows Kaori's name, and wants to build from there, since she's the sister of an infamous crime lord (which he doesn't know is dead and is confused why Kaori is using her brother's name, and he also doesn't want to be disrespectful to Kaori for fear of... Well, Yamato)

However, he's also not entirely out of sympathy, and knows when someone is in pain, or rather is already going through a lot, even if he's a sadistic vampire.

He's also, oddly enough, well versed. Even if he's ignorant to the history of New York's denizens, that's not to say he's stupid (or even a supremacist). He's just a guy that wants to be the best gang, and also for him and his gang to not starve (which is a persistent issue)

Infact, here's a few conversations that show them.

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These are neat. I like the lines with Seven though I'd edit them a bit to make each line shorter.
"You have all this power and yet you waste it on petty crime?"
"I accept what I am. I just wanna be me."
"Spoken as someone who accepts shackles willingly."

"Startin' to sound like Drifter with that talk"
"And? If someone's right, they're right."
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I'm gonna go through abilities and point out some things.

Disclaimer - Since there is no hint to his base stats and gun's function, I'd assume he is a bruiser hero who relies on lifesteal, like Victor.

1 - How long is the base distance? How long is the max stun duration? Self-stunning can be risky, especially if you lunge forward and outposition yourself. Also, 15% base lifesteal is too small for a single-target ability.

2 - Does it automatically trigger upon dashing? I think making this into a self-buff ability instead of a proc per dash ability, since you can boost dashes with 3.

3 - Flight is pretty out of his bruiser archetype in my opinion. You might want to give bonus Spirit damage per shot to his gun(Like Vindicta) if he is going to be used as a gunner. Boosting dash instead of locking your position for a short time is also a great design, but restricting the dash direction to your aim can be cumbersome in some situations.

4 - Does he also die when all the mosquito spawns die? He could rather spawn mosquito swarms(Like Death Prophet's from Dota 2 Ultimate) instead of transforming into one, so he can benefit from other buffs as well.

That is all.
 
I'm gonna go through abilities and point out some things.

Disclaimer - Since there is no hint to his base stats and gun's function, I'd assume he is a bruiser hero who relies on lifesteal, like Victor.

1 - How long is the base distance? How long is the max stun duration? Self-stunning can be risky, especially if you lunge forward and outposition yourself. Also, 15% base lifesteal is too small for a single-target ability.

2 - Does it automatically trigger upon dashing? I think making this into a self-buff ability instead of a proc per dash ability, since you can boost dashes with 3.

3 - Flight is pretty out of his bruiser archetype in my opinion. You might want to give bonus Spirit damage per shot to his gun(Like Vindicta) if he is going to be used as a gunner. Boosting dash instead of locking your position for a short time is also a great design, but restricting the dash direction to your aim can be cumbersome in some situations.

4 - Does he also die when all the mosquito spawns die? He could rather spawn mosquito swarms(Like Death Prophet's from Dota 2 Ultimate) instead of transforming into one, so he can benefit from other buffs as well.

That is all.
He's an area denial lifestealer, with abilities that extend his "Influence" and helps keep him alive. Agile and annoying.

His gun, "Blood Fee", is a 16 shot, semi-fast revolver that has fast-moving projectiles that does great at medium range, and has some potential longer ranged.

1 - I'd say he'd go about 11 meters at a speed of 5.6m/s and can subtly change his direction. The stun lasts as long as Blutson impales you. The distance can be extended with Duration Extender, while the size of the impale can be extended with Expansion, allowing for easier impales.

2 - Yes. The trail triggers when you dash, and trails as long as the dash, with the actual duration of the trail being independent of the amount trailed.

3 - Flight is basically meant to play into thirst and trail, and the increased firerate makes it so that self-defense is more viable, as well as playing as a literal mosquito, and can be even more menacing with good upgrades. And how it can play into his other abilities, his reduced stamina on dash makes trails of pests constant, and the thirst can be used while flying and doesn't cancel flight.

4 - He does die when all mosquitos are killed (Because he literally is the mosquitos), and all of the health that the mosquitos have will be transferred to Blutson when he returns to form. I wanted it so that his swarm is unique compared to other ults, and didn't want it to be just another Seven, Haze, or Mina ult, while also making it some kind of "Plague of Mosquitos". And before you ask, yes, the items that you buy also apply to the mosquitos. (Stuff life Spirit Lifesteal/Infuser increases their lifesteal)
 
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