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ADAMO THE KEEPER:
Aria Control, Keeper, Patient.
Hello everyone, this is my first attempt on a serious character concept so the idea might not work that well but I loved it nonetheless. I'd like to hear your opinions but please be kind, and let us all have fun together, shall we?
My idea for his primary fire/weapon is for him to use small crosses as throwable kunais, that he would summon from the censer. I have not detailed damage and the technicalities for the simple reason that I don't understand game balance, so I would like to hear from you what you think would be acceptable.
ABILITIES:
LORE:
Adamo, from the latim Adamare, have two meanings, first it means Adam or made from the earth. Second is "to love with intensity" and "The one who loves". He refuses to talk about his past, his mentor is one of the remaining Venators and a great friend of THE Venator. Adamo began his training at a very young age, always showing a level of patiance that outmatched even the elders of the church. Now at his early twenties, He believes peace and kindness can change even the worst of enemies but even being this gentle does not mean he knows no hate. The Patrons for example, are his greatest enemies... He firmly believes that if they enter our world it will bring horror beyond human comprehention.
He is friends, or at least neutral, with most others in the ritual. Rem is very friendly with Adamo who brings him and his little helpers sweet snacks. They often goof around when time is plenty. He greatly respects Venator who, from time to time comes to drink tea at Adamo's hideout at the top of a tall building close to the Museum. Strangely, and almost comically, his eyes are fixed on Mina Ha. Perhaps because of her beauty or his own nature of wanting to fill the void in other people's hearts, he has unintentionally developed feelings for her. A healthy obsession with trying to make her understand and empathize with others. Trying to fix her. But there is more. Adamo, somehow became friends with the doorman, often helping him in the baroness when needed. But not everyone deserve his kindness, and he is not free from hating anyone... Adamo loathes the drifter, and is ploting the coldest of traps to destroy the wicked vampire...
This character is still very raw, I'll try to update it as time allows me to. I'd love some hints on balance and some other lore ideas. thank you for your attention.
INTERACTIONS:
Here are a few interactions just so you can have an idea of the comic relief I was going for, inspired by Vyper obssetion with THE LASH. lamo. If you have any suggestions for interactions I's love to hear them.
HIDDEN KING:
"You have fought for others all your live Adamo. Now you found something, someone you want to help... The Hidden King will aid you in your crusade."
"The Human heart have needs that most can't understand Adamo. Listen to yours, and the Hidden King will guide you."
"She plays a dangerous game Adamo, and you are running out of time. Help the Hidden King, and the Hidden King shall help you."
ARCH MOTHER:
"Through patience you have shaped yourself and helped others. But patience alone will not be enough to change someone with such a large and dangerous goal. Let the Arch Mother help you save her."
"Throughout the years you have been a pillar for many. Allow the Arch Mother to be yours, and together we will be capable of so much more."
"My child, you seek peace and calm, but both only come with order. The Hidden King wish to bring chaos the your world. Summon the Arch Mother, and together we will make peace."
Abrams:
Adamo - Detective, if you need help on destroing the book, count me in.
Abrams - Wow, it is the first time someone offers help instead of desire for the book or a warning about it.
Adamo - Nah, I want it gonne just as much as you, we can try holy fire if you wish.
Abrams - Sadly I already tried it.
Apolo:
Apolo - Do you have a problem with me?
Adamo - No. Why do you think so? (Sarcastic)
Apolo - Because you are looking at me with disgust. Is it because I'm Ixian?
Adamo - No. It is for the fact that you are a teenager. I hate teenagers.
The Doorman:
Doorman - You seem tense my friend. Did anything bad happen?
Adamo - Nothing much, it's just that... I have this weird feeling when around some people.
Doorman - Oh my, if that is the case would you join me after the ritual, I'll be sure to treat you your favorite sweets from the baroness restaurant.
Adamo - Thank you, my friend. I'll gladly take your offer.
Mina Ha 1º:
Mina - Oh, it's you again...
Adamo - I didn't expect to find you here, Mina. You look beautiful today.
Mina - Please, I always look splendid.
Adamo - I hope the content is just as pretty as the cover...
Rem:
Rem - Hi friend. You smell like fruit sweets.
Adamo - That's because I bought my favorite friand an apple pie.
Rem - Yey. Thank you, you are the bestest.
Adamo - When we are done here you and your little friends can eat as much as you want.
Rem and Mina About Adamo:
Rem - My friend talks a lot about someone called Mina...
Mina - Well, I guess your friend have good taste.
Rem - *Gasps* You can't eat him, he is my friend. If you bite him I'll bite you [Angry Rem Noises]
Mina - That's not what I meat... Ugh, Just forget about it.
Aria Control, Keeper, Patient.
Hello everyone, this is my first attempt on a serious character concept so the idea might not work that well but I loved it nonetheless. I'd like to hear your opinions but please be kind, and let us all have fun together, shall we?
My idea for his primary fire/weapon is for him to use small crosses as throwable kunais, that he would summon from the censer. I have not detailed damage and the technicalities for the simple reason that I don't understand game balance, so I would like to hear from you what you think would be acceptable.
ABILITIES:
LORE:
Adamo, from the latim Adamare, have two meanings, first it means Adam or made from the earth. Second is "to love with intensity" and "The one who loves". He refuses to talk about his past, his mentor is one of the remaining Venators and a great friend of THE Venator. Adamo began his training at a very young age, always showing a level of patiance that outmatched even the elders of the church. Now at his early twenties, He believes peace and kindness can change even the worst of enemies but even being this gentle does not mean he knows no hate. The Patrons for example, are his greatest enemies... He firmly believes that if they enter our world it will bring horror beyond human comprehention.
He is friends, or at least neutral, with most others in the ritual. Rem is very friendly with Adamo who brings him and his little helpers sweet snacks. They often goof around when time is plenty. He greatly respects Venator who, from time to time comes to drink tea at Adamo's hideout at the top of a tall building close to the Museum. Strangely, and almost comically, his eyes are fixed on Mina Ha. Perhaps because of her beauty or his own nature of wanting to fill the void in other people's hearts, he has unintentionally developed feelings for her. A healthy obsession with trying to make her understand and empathize with others. Trying to fix her. But there is more. Adamo, somehow became friends with the doorman, often helping him in the baroness when needed. But not everyone deserve his kindness, and he is not free from hating anyone... Adamo loathes the drifter, and is ploting the coldest of traps to destroy the wicked vampire...
This character is still very raw, I'll try to update it as time allows me to. I'd love some hints on balance and some other lore ideas. thank you for your attention.
INTERACTIONS:
Here are a few interactions just so you can have an idea of the comic relief I was going for, inspired by Vyper obssetion with THE LASH. lamo. If you have any suggestions for interactions I's love to hear them.
HIDDEN KING:
"You have fought for others all your live Adamo. Now you found something, someone you want to help... The Hidden King will aid you in your crusade."
"The Human heart have needs that most can't understand Adamo. Listen to yours, and the Hidden King will guide you."
"She plays a dangerous game Adamo, and you are running out of time. Help the Hidden King, and the Hidden King shall help you."
ARCH MOTHER:
"Through patience you have shaped yourself and helped others. But patience alone will not be enough to change someone with such a large and dangerous goal. Let the Arch Mother help you save her."
"Throughout the years you have been a pillar for many. Allow the Arch Mother to be yours, and together we will be capable of so much more."
"My child, you seek peace and calm, but both only come with order. The Hidden King wish to bring chaos the your world. Summon the Arch Mother, and together we will make peace."
Abrams:
Adamo - Detective, if you need help on destroing the book, count me in.
Abrams - Wow, it is the first time someone offers help instead of desire for the book or a warning about it.
Adamo - Nah, I want it gonne just as much as you, we can try holy fire if you wish.
Abrams - Sadly I already tried it.
Apolo:
Apolo - Do you have a problem with me?
Adamo - No. Why do you think so? (Sarcastic)
Apolo - Because you are looking at me with disgust. Is it because I'm Ixian?
Adamo - No. It is for the fact that you are a teenager. I hate teenagers.
The Doorman:
Doorman - You seem tense my friend. Did anything bad happen?
Adamo - Nothing much, it's just that... I have this weird feeling when around some people.
Doorman - Oh my, if that is the case would you join me after the ritual, I'll be sure to treat you your favorite sweets from the baroness restaurant.
Adamo - Thank you, my friend. I'll gladly take your offer.
Mina Ha 1º:
Mina - Oh, it's you again...
Adamo - I didn't expect to find you here, Mina. You look beautiful today.
Mina - Please, I always look splendid.
Adamo - I hope the content is just as pretty as the cover...
Rem:
Rem - Hi friend. You smell like fruit sweets.
Adamo - That's because I bought my favorite friand an apple pie.
Rem - Yey. Thank you, you are the bestest.
Adamo - When we are done here you and your little friends can eat as much as you want.
Rem and Mina About Adamo:
Rem - My friend talks a lot about someone called Mina...
Mina - Well, I guess your friend have good taste.
Rem - *Gasps* You can't eat him, he is my friend. If you bite him I'll bite you [Angry Rem Noises]
Mina - That's not what I meat... Ugh, Just forget about it.
