Lore:
Competing with calico for the spot of the top assassin the doppelganger uses her horrible curse to her advantage. the doppelganger curse gives her the ability (among other things) to look like someone who the person who looks at her knows well. she may look like a family member, a close...
that is originally what I wanted but i am not sure how it would work. if the ult is to get back in the mech does that mean he starts in mech form and just dies if the mech dies until he unlocks the ult then instead of dying he jumps out like diva and can get back in? it gets kinda messy. if you...
Information which deadmock doesn't have a place to add:
while out side of scrapper mech he is roughly the same size as REM
this allows him to use the secret tunnels like him as well
Really cool concept, I love the style and theme you’ve given Faey the “wind dancer” vibe comes through super well! Her mobility + dagger theme feels unique and could make for some very flashy, high-skill gameplay.
One thing I might suggest is rethinking how her daggers work. Right now, since...
that's true I will change that, but that is not the only issue with the grammar of this description, for example
"inflicts damage over time of their current health."
uses the incorrect preposition "of" changing it to "to" would be more correct.
there for I believe
"Reduces the healing...
it is. I made sure by double checking it with multiple grammar checkers. the changes I recommended would make it more grammatically correct. I also asked multiple of my friends and they agreed my version made more sense grammatically.
my friend see's me multiple times in his menu that shows what friends are playing.
edit: This issue has gotten worse sense I made this post. the number of me keeps increasing.
I Found a grammar mistake in the regular English version of the game. the description of the spirit item "Decay" has incorrect grammar and/or confusing language.
the current description reads
"reduces healing received of targeted enemy and inflicts damage over time of their current health...