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Lore:
- Name: Onyx Rockwell
-Second child of a family that owns a magic crystal mine.
-Is not in line for the inheritance for the crystal mine so seeks to fulfill their life in other ways.
-Wants to be mayor of New York, and genuinely wants what's best for the people, but due to political corruption or not having enough influence loses the election, now turns to the Patrons to help in their efforts.
-Thinks child labor is a good thing.
Concept:
-A controller who can create hazardous ground conditions and can use their abilities to knock people into them.
-Can cure debuffs/ccs and the ult is a to help with team pushes.
Design:
-Uses a crystalline revolver as their weapon, starts with 12 shots and a smaller bullet size. Faster bullet velocity than average.
-Is wearing old school mining gear slightly more fashionable than the rest.
-Crystals imbedded into their clothes (not a lot) and crystal earrings.
Ability 1, Mineral Pushboard: Create a small platform behind an enemy that, after a short arming time, knocks them forwards and does spirit damage. (similar to viscous fist but always knocks in one direction)
25s CD, 40m range
1- Increase size of the Pushboard
2- -5s CD
3- Increase Knockback on enemy
Notes:
-Could also be potentially used for self-movement.
-Punishes overuse of dashes as you if you don't have enough stamina for dashes, it will hit you.
-Can be used in tandem with ability 3 to make the enemy take for damage and become slowed.
Ability 2, Restorative Quartz: Throw a quartz shard at an ally that removes any debuffs/ccs on them currently and gives them spirit/bullet resistance for 10s based on your current spirit power. Can be self-cast.
36s CD, 30m range
1- +20 range
2- x1.3 spirit/bullet resistance given
3- Increase time ally has bonus resistances by 5s
Notes:
-I wanted it to give debuff/cc immunity after instead of the resistances, but I think that would be too op. It also has a long CD and no innate CD reduction the ability upgrades so that you can't spam it on a fed teammate to make them practically unstoppable.
Ability 3, Sharp Gems (Passive): Whenever you shoot an enemy after a short delay create a small area of sharp gems underneath their feet that slows and does spirit damage to those that walk over it.
4s CD, 1m radius, lasts for 10s
1- +X dps
2- Increase radius by 2m
3-Increase duration by 5s
Notes:
-Should do bonus damage to Vindicta because she's barefoot.
-I think this ability will be fun to have but also a bit of a nuisance to play against.
-Not very useful against airborne targets, good for farming and minions though.
Ability 4, Crystaline Campaign: Create a path forward full of Crystal shards on the ground that are larger and does more spirit damage than the gems created by the passive, still applies the same amount of slow. Allies standing on the shards get bonus bullet/spirit resistance as well as extra movement speed.
105s CD, 6m wide, 30m long, lasts for 30s
1- -26 CD
2- Increase Width of ult by 2m and Length of ult by 5m
3- +X dps
Notes:
-Only the length of the area of crystals should scale with ability range, I think if you increase the width with the length, it will scale weirdly and make it too powerful.
-This ability is ideally supposed to help stalled team fights were both teams are waiting for the other to push, it gives advantage to the team that's pushing but it's highly telegraphed giving opponents enough time to react and deal with it accordingly with their own abilities.
-Also, now that I write this out it's too similar to Kiriko's ult from Overwatch...
Overall:
-I think items that give ability reach and duration will be incredibly good on this character due to the passive allowing them to lock down large areas of ground.
-I also think this character is better against other characters who lack vertical mobility, as characters who can fly can ignore pretty much all of the abilities. Though to be far flying ignores most abilities in the game anyways.
Conclusion: Let me know what you guys think. I'm very curious as to what people think about the concept so far...
- Name: Onyx Rockwell
-Second child of a family that owns a magic crystal mine.
-Is not in line for the inheritance for the crystal mine so seeks to fulfill their life in other ways.
-Wants to be mayor of New York, and genuinely wants what's best for the people, but due to political corruption or not having enough influence loses the election, now turns to the Patrons to help in their efforts.
-Thinks child labor is a good thing.
Concept:
-A controller who can create hazardous ground conditions and can use their abilities to knock people into them.
-Can cure debuffs/ccs and the ult is a to help with team pushes.
Design:
-Uses a crystalline revolver as their weapon, starts with 12 shots and a smaller bullet size. Faster bullet velocity than average.
-Is wearing old school mining gear slightly more fashionable than the rest.
-Crystals imbedded into their clothes (not a lot) and crystal earrings.
Ability 1, Mineral Pushboard: Create a small platform behind an enemy that, after a short arming time, knocks them forwards and does spirit damage. (similar to viscous fist but always knocks in one direction)
25s CD, 40m range
1- Increase size of the Pushboard
2- -5s CD
3- Increase Knockback on enemy
Notes:
-Could also be potentially used for self-movement.
-Punishes overuse of dashes as you if you don't have enough stamina for dashes, it will hit you.
-Can be used in tandem with ability 3 to make the enemy take for damage and become slowed.
Ability 2, Restorative Quartz: Throw a quartz shard at an ally that removes any debuffs/ccs on them currently and gives them spirit/bullet resistance for 10s based on your current spirit power. Can be self-cast.
36s CD, 30m range
1- +20 range
2- x1.3 spirit/bullet resistance given
3- Increase time ally has bonus resistances by 5s
Notes:
-I wanted it to give debuff/cc immunity after instead of the resistances, but I think that would be too op. It also has a long CD and no innate CD reduction the ability upgrades so that you can't spam it on a fed teammate to make them practically unstoppable.
Ability 3, Sharp Gems (Passive): Whenever you shoot an enemy after a short delay create a small area of sharp gems underneath their feet that slows and does spirit damage to those that walk over it.
4s CD, 1m radius, lasts for 10s
1- +X dps
2- Increase radius by 2m
3-Increase duration by 5s
Notes:
-Should do bonus damage to Vindicta because she's barefoot.
-I think this ability will be fun to have but also a bit of a nuisance to play against.
-Not very useful against airborne targets, good for farming and minions though.
Ability 4, Crystaline Campaign: Create a path forward full of Crystal shards on the ground that are larger and does more spirit damage than the gems created by the passive, still applies the same amount of slow. Allies standing on the shards get bonus bullet/spirit resistance as well as extra movement speed.
105s CD, 6m wide, 30m long, lasts for 30s
1- -26 CD
2- Increase Width of ult by 2m and Length of ult by 5m
3- +X dps
Notes:
-Only the length of the area of crystals should scale with ability range, I think if you increase the width with the length, it will scale weirdly and make it too powerful.
-This ability is ideally supposed to help stalled team fights were both teams are waiting for the other to push, it gives advantage to the team that's pushing but it's highly telegraphed giving opponents enough time to react and deal with it accordingly with their own abilities.
-Also, now that I write this out it's too similar to Kiriko's ult from Overwatch...
Overall:
-I think items that give ability reach and duration will be incredibly good on this character due to the passive allowing them to lock down large areas of ground.
-I also think this character is better against other characters who lack vertical mobility, as characters who can fly can ignore pretty much all of the abilities. Though to be far flying ignores most abilities in the game anyways.
Conclusion: Let me know what you guys think. I'm very curious as to what people think about the concept so far...
