[Hero Idea] Business Shark

[ira_rubchenya]

I wanted to create an easy character with an obvious combination of abilities. He will be good for beginners.
No numbers or percentages, just concept.
The first ability is to jump forward. If you jump into an enemy, you'll bite him and get 1 blood charge. The ability can also be used as an escape.
2nd – classic aoe stun
3rd – sucking in enemies towards you. + If you are poor or greedy, then fortunately this ability also steals money
4th – passive ability. Blood stacks grant you movement speed and health regeneration. After death, you lose all blood stacks.
He shoots teeth.

So the combination of abilities is pretty simple. I think he would be a good support and tank.

 

[Firebeard]

I like it, solid concept. But why is he a Business Shark instead of a Loan Shark?

 

[SingularityMaw]

Lovely artwork, always did love sharks.

4th – passive ability. Blood stacks grant you movement speed and health regeneration. After death, you lose all blood stacks.

I'm not sure I understand. A very simple effect like this would fit better attached to a basic ability with a duration, no? Unless you'd make it very powerful, such as making it percent health regeneration. It would need to be strong anyway, since it wants you to get aggro and reward you for it.

3rd – sucking in enemies towards you. + If you are poor or greedy, then fortunately this ability also steals money

This can totally work, just need to put it on taking unsecured souls and it's actually fun. Also, let it make Unsecured soul orbs roll towards him, that seems very fitting.

He shoots teeth.

Somehow not as gross as Viscous shooting pieces of his suit.

 

[ira_rubchenya]

I like it, solid concept. But why is he a Business Shark instead of a Loan Shark?

since English is not my native language, I did not know that there was such a term as Loan Shark. But in Russian we have Business Shark term

 

[onaga5515]

really good hero idea.

 

[onaga5515]

add this character .

 

[Дедлокер]

Great art and solid hero idea, but his ult needs a rework i think. Make it so his 3rd skill steals souls and turns them INTO unsecured souls(so that the enemy can kill you and get them back). And then make is ult something like
"Unlimited Greed" - Gives you movement speed and Health regen based on the number of your unsecured souls, can be activated to "Swallow" your unsecured souls, making them instantly secured. And make it have a long CD 100-200 seconds.
Шикарная идея и арт. Молодец

 

[Дедлокер]

You can then remake the first ability to
"Blood in the water" - Jump forward, biting any enemy on your path and making them bleed. Bleeding enemies take periodic spirit damage.
And then add a 5AP upgrade that says: "Bleeding enemies take 20% extra damage from ALL sources" or alternatively: "Steal 3x souls from bleeding enemies(with 3rd ability)". Very thematic
He can also fit in the lore with Viscous and Fathom (creatures from the deep)

 

[Дедлокер]

How does something like this look for you? Having a lot of unsecured souls makes him REALLY fast and tanky, but it is risky, since when you die you lose them.
Ability icons from Dynamo since i am bad with drawing on PC. Also i am not sure abot the math on the ult, might be too powerful.

 

[Дедлокер]

How does something like this look for you? Having a lot of unsecured souls makes him REALLY fast and tanky, but it is risky, since when you die you lose them.
Ability icons from Dynamo since i am bad with drawing on PC. Also i am not sure abot the math on the ult, might be too powerful.

Now that i look on it, i made the 5 AP Soul Vacum upgrade OP. Oops XD

 

[ira_rubchenya]

How does something like this look for you? Having a lot of unsecured souls makes him REALLY fast and tanky, but it is risky, since when you die you lose them.
Ability icons from Dynamo since i am bad with drawing on PC. Also i am not sure abot the math on the ult, might be too powerful.
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Good alternative
But I think when you create an idea for a character, you don't have to describe it in such detail, because it's up to the devs to decide what to do with that character :- D