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国庆无聊，正好把文本全部过一遍
按文件顺序砍，工程量较大，发帖频率会比较低，但知道我在一条条看文本就行
按文件顺序砍，工程量较大，发帖频率会比较低，但知道我在一条条看文本就行
整理当前简中翻译的问题及修改建议/思路
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（备用楼）
*重要*目前游戏的翻译完成度远低于可公开程度，下方纠错及修改建议仅作为/用于将翻译品质提升到*相对*还行、现阶段测试能用的程度（以及问题翻译的尽早止损），在游戏正式版发布前，翻译仍需经历系统性的修改甚至推翻重做
整体(普遍)问题
(TBA) 关于半角字符(英文及符号)与全角字符(简中字符)间是否有加空格的必要（字体不存在间距过紧问题、部分文本游戏内显示间距过大(HUD为主)）
*重要*目前游戏的翻译完成度远低于可公开程度，下方纠错及修改建议仅作为/用于将翻译品质提升到*相对*还行、现阶段测试能用的程度（以及问题翻译的尽早止损），在游戏正式版发布前，翻译仍需经历系统性的修改甚至推翻重做
整体(普遍)问题
(TBA) 关于半角字符(英文及符号)与全角字符(简中字符)间是否有加空格的必要（字体不存在间距过紧问题、部分文本游戏内显示间距过大(HUD为主)）
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文件 citadel_main
line 8~11
"OK" "好的"
"Cancel" "取消"
"Close" "关闭"
"DontShowAgain" "不再显示"
Ok“好的”改为“确认”更合适
line 15
"Citadel_PlaytestWarningBody"
"欢迎来到 Deadlock。本游戏仍然处于开发初期，有很多临时艺术作品和实验性游戏玩法。欢迎所有反馈！"
"Welcome to Deadlock. This game is early in development, with a lot of temporary art and experimental gameplay. All feedback welcome!"
"temporary art and experimental gameplay" (采用)临时美术(设计及建模)、实验性游戏内容(不特指玩法方面)
"All feedback welcome" ”欢迎所有反馈“ ”所有“改”各类“（强调种类）
// Client only rich presence
line 25~26
"Citadel_RP_LookingToTrade" "想交易" "Looking To Trade"
"Citadel_RP_LookingToPlay" "想玩游戏" "Looking To Play"
问题出在Looking To Play翻译上，此处应该是希望组队（play (with)），前一条统一格式修改为希望交易
line 28~29
"Citadel_AlertPlayer_MatchReadyTitle" "比赛就绪"
"Citadel_AlertPlayer_MatchReadyText" "游戏已开始。"
原文用了match和game，但中文没理由也分开翻译，建议统一成比赛
// disconnection
这部分不是很懂所以没细看，但感觉大白话有点多
//Game
line 140
"Citadel_Scoreboard_TeamKills" "击杀次数" "Kills"
显示于游戏内计分板中间的团队数据文本。”击杀次数“会产生歧义（被击杀次数），建议改为”击杀数“
// Discord Invite
虽然line 180有提到，但其他地方还是明确一下是邀请加入的是Discord频道为好。
line 169~170
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_AlreadyClaimedTitle" "已领取" "Already Claimed"
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_AlreadyClaimedText" "你已经接受了 Discord 邀请。每位用户只可接受一份邀请。" "You have already claimed your Discord invite. We only allow for a single invite per user."
claimed前后翻译不一致。
”已邀请(领取)“建议改成”已被邀请“，have和have been的区别还是有的。
line 173~174
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_DisabledTitle" "已禁用" "Disabled"
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_DisabledText" "维护期间，Discord 邀请暂时禁用。请稍后再试。" "Discord invites have been temporarily disabled while we perform maintenance. Please try again in a little while."
”维护期间“缺少主语。前半句建议改成类似”Discord频道正在维护，频道邀请暂时关闭“之类的。disabled也不建议用”禁用“，无法体现其临时性，建议更换翻译
line 178
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_ConfirmCloseText"
"你确定要关闭 Discord 对话吗？此对话关闭后，你将无法再生成 Discord 邀请链接。"
"Are you sure you want to close the Discord Dialog? You will no longer be able to generate a Discord invite link once this dialog is closed."
倒不是错，而是用得少。直接用”窗口/界面“更直白些
line 180
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_Description"
"如下所示，你已受邀加入 Deadlock 的 Discord 频道，将链接复制到浏览器中并按照提示加入。"
"Your invite to join the Deadlock discord is listed below, copy the link into a browser and follow the prompts to join."
纯瞎翻。”...频道的邀请链接已显示在下方。“
// User Feedback
line 198~199
"Citadel_UserFeedback_eType_CriticalBug" "严重错误" "Critical Bug"
"Citadel_UserFeedback_eType_Bug" "错误" "Bug"
bug就叫bug就行，翻作“错误”反而是消歧义消出歧义了
line 264少了一条"Citadel_MatchHistory_ServerIssue"，此喽后续行数以简中为准
line 307
"Citadel_Hud_OpenShop" "按下 [ {s:upgrade_key} ] 选购" "Press [ {s:upgrade_key} ] to Shop"
*很怪，但这么翻好像也没啥问题。姑且先列出来。
line 311~313
缺少/更新文本：
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteCaption" "{s:cheater_name}"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteAlert" "Someone in your game was caught cheating..."
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteAlert_Action" "Hold <span class=\"keybind\">[{s:show_scoreboard}]</span> to decide their fate"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVote_Option_Ban" "立即封禁" "Ban and<br>Leave Match"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteCaption" "玩家 {s:cheater_name} 作弊被抓。"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVote_Option_Play" "现在变青蛙，稍后再封禁" "Frog Now,<br>Ban Later"
“作弊被抓”改为“被发现作弊”
frog now的now完全没必要翻出来，直接“变为青蛙”就行
line 8~11
"OK" "好的"
"Cancel" "取消"
"Close" "关闭"
"DontShowAgain" "不再显示"
Ok“好的”改为“确认”更合适
line 15
"Citadel_PlaytestWarningBody"
"欢迎来到 Deadlock。本游戏仍然处于开发初期，有很多临时艺术作品和实验性游戏玩法。欢迎所有反馈！"
"Welcome to Deadlock. This game is early in development, with a lot of temporary art and experimental gameplay. All feedback welcome!"
"temporary art and experimental gameplay" (采用)临时美术(设计及建模)、实验性游戏内容(不特指玩法方面)
"All feedback welcome" ”欢迎所有反馈“ ”所有“改”各类“（强调种类）
// Client only rich presence
line 25~26
"Citadel_RP_LookingToTrade" "想交易" "Looking To Trade"
"Citadel_RP_LookingToPlay" "想玩游戏" "Looking To Play"
问题出在Looking To Play翻译上，此处应该是希望组队（play (with)），前一条统一格式修改为希望交易
line 28~29
"Citadel_AlertPlayer_MatchReadyTitle" "比赛就绪"
"Citadel_AlertPlayer_MatchReadyText" "游戏已开始。"
原文用了match和game，但中文没理由也分开翻译，建议统一成比赛
// disconnection
这部分不是很懂所以没细看，但感觉大白话有点多
//Game
line 140
"Citadel_Scoreboard_TeamKills" "击杀次数" "Kills"
显示于游戏内计分板中间的团队数据文本。”击杀次数“会产生歧义（被击杀次数），建议改为”击杀数“
// Discord Invite
虽然line 180有提到，但其他地方还是明确一下是邀请加入的是Discord频道为好。
line 169~170
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_AlreadyClaimedTitle" "已领取" "Already Claimed"
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_AlreadyClaimedText" "你已经接受了 Discord 邀请。每位用户只可接受一份邀请。" "You have already claimed your Discord invite. We only allow for a single invite per user."
claimed前后翻译不一致。
”已邀请(领取)“建议改成”已被邀请“，have和have been的区别还是有的。
line 173~174
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_DisabledTitle" "已禁用" "Disabled"
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_DisabledText" "维护期间，Discord 邀请暂时禁用。请稍后再试。" "Discord invites have been temporarily disabled while we perform maintenance. Please try again in a little while."
”维护期间“缺少主语。前半句建议改成类似”Discord频道正在维护，频道邀请暂时关闭“之类的。disabled也不建议用”禁用“，无法体现其临时性，建议更换翻译
line 178
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_ConfirmCloseText"
"你确定要关闭 Discord 对话吗？此对话关闭后，你将无法再生成 Discord 邀请链接。"
"Are you sure you want to close the Discord Dialog? You will no longer be able to generate a Discord invite link once this dialog is closed."
倒不是错，而是用得少。直接用”窗口/界面“更直白些
line 180
"Citadel_DiscordInvite_Description"
"如下所示，你已受邀加入 Deadlock 的 Discord 频道，将链接复制到浏览器中并按照提示加入。"
"Your invite to join the Deadlock discord is listed below, copy the link into a browser and follow the prompts to join."
纯瞎翻。”...频道的邀请链接已显示在下方。“
// User Feedback
line 198~199
"Citadel_UserFeedback_eType_CriticalBug" "严重错误" "Critical Bug"
"Citadel_UserFeedback_eType_Bug" "错误" "Bug"
bug就叫bug就行，翻作“错误”反而是消歧义消出歧义了
line 264少了一条"Citadel_MatchHistory_ServerIssue"，此喽后续行数以简中为准
line 307
"Citadel_Hud_OpenShop" "按下 [ {s:upgrade_key} ] 选购" "Press [ {s:upgrade_key} ] to Shop"
*很怪，但这么翻好像也没啥问题。姑且先列出来。
line 311~313
缺少/更新文本：
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteCaption" "{s:cheater_name}"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteAlert" "Someone in your game was caught cheating..."
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteAlert_Action" "Hold <span class=\"keybind\">[{s:show_scoreboard}]</span> to decide their fate"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVote_Option_Ban" "立即封禁" "Ban and<br>Leave Match"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVoteCaption" "玩家 {s:cheater_name} 作弊被抓。"
"Citadel_Hud_CheaterVote_Option_Play" "现在变青蛙，稍后再封禁" "Frog Now,<br>Ban Later"
“作弊被抓”改为“被发现作弊”
frog now的now完全没必要翻出来，直接“变为青蛙”就行
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